Generally people like shopping .Men are reluctant and wait until they need something, but it is a passion for women.It is a form of social interaction.It is about freedom, self confidence.
Women always have reasons for going shopping.They want to feel relaxed or reward themselves.It is the most suitable activity when they have free time and it is a therapy for them.Also there are a lot of special days when they need buy gifts like Valiente's Day,anniversaries of marriage,birthdays...
One of the reasons the passion of shopping is shopping centers that we see everywhere. People can buy clothes, jewelleries and other things at a discount at these shopping centers. Moreover they get people encourage for shopping with a lot of advertisement. So they can extract money from people's pocket.
Because of these reasons, specially women buy a lot of unnecessary things.Most women have many hangbags, shoes that they don't wear in their wardrobes. They understand that they needen't buy so much things.However they can't help going shopping. They walk into a store without any real purpose or they are in there with the intention of buying one or two items. Furthermore if they haven't enough time for going shopping, they do online shopping.
Women must take precautions for unnecessary shopping. They should focus on what will really benefit.They should control themselves and get organised. They must do shopping list. If they enter a shop with a list, they will only buy what is on the list. Besides, before they buy anything, they must slow down and think.And they must memorize people who even can't buy necessary things for subsisting.
Dear Dilek :)
YanıtlaSilI really like your journal entry. You have described the passion of shopping so vividly that I can imagine while I’m reading.You have provided a lot of detail about the topic.You have organized your entry with paragraphs and these paragraphs make your entry fluent. By choosing colorful pictures, you can attract everybody’s attention :) I would like to read more about you. What kind of person you? Have you got passion of shopping, too?. On the other hand, I will be very pleasant to sharing your grammatical mistakes. I think that this problem does not result from your insufficient grammar knowledge, it result from your oversight. I believe you will be able to recognize your mistakes over time.Let me show you your mistakes : anniversaries of marriage(I think there is only one anniversary:) ), jewelleries( Uncountable noun), .So & .And (fragment-you can’t start a sentence with them), enough time for going shopping ( you should remember “adj+ too/enough +to do sth”) and you should use more modals. All in all, I am sure that I will read your next journals with the same pleasure :) I <3 U :)
Dear classmate :)
YanıtlaSilI want to tell you about myself. I haven't got passion of shopping. However, I have had a different problem about shopping. I am so indecisive that I can't buy almost anything even if I spend my whole day doing shopping :(
Thank you very much for your comment :)