Learning a new foreign language can be compelling for many people. While people try to learn a new language, some problems appear. I think; most probable one is memorizing words since there are a lot of words which should be memorized. However, of course memorizing all of them is impossible. So people need a device or program that will solve these problems.
On the market there are lots of online programs which translate words; but they aren't useful for us. As programs don't have ability of comment; when we want to translate a sentence or a figurative word, they can't translate words or they translate words absurdly. So I designed a program to solve this problem.
This program can be used by people of all ages wanting to learn a new language. As I said before it will be an online program. By using this program, we will translate sentences or figurative words properly, beause; when we write the word which will be translated, it will be translated by people who were chosen especially for this job. When we write the sentences or words on computer or mobile phones via this online program, they will translate them immediately and tell us. In other words, we will hear pronunciations of the words from people working at translation centres.These are advantages of the program.
Although the program is very useful, there may be some disadvantages of it. To illustrate, when there are plenty of people using this program at the same time, it takes some time learning the translation of word. However, this problem can be solved by increasing the number of the people working at translation centres.Firstly, translation centers should be established and people should be employed especially for this job to using this program effectively. As we need manpower for it, using this program will be costly.
To sum up, learning a new language will be so easy due to this program. It is useful for people from every age. I recommend you to use it. :)
*you should correct “appaer” as “appear”
YanıtlaSil*you should correct the form of “all of them”
*you should use a comma after “So”
*you should use a comma after “On the market”
Dear Dilek,
First of all, I want to appreciate you to design such a good device. I find your device quite useful for learners. Its qualities are interesting and I advise you to improve them and present this devise immediately. Regarding the organization of your text, I see, you tried to write well generally but I think can improve it,too. With respect to your language use, I think, you have made some grammar mistakes that I implied above. I think you should correct these mistakes. Also, I think, you should give more importance to use of fragments, spelling and also choosing appropriate words but i think they stem from just lack of your attention. You should pay more attention to these but in general I liked your ideas and text. Congratulations!
Dear Nurullah,
YanıtlaSilThank you very much for your comment :)